The Explosive Prologue of True Surrender: A Military Romance That Starts With a Boom
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Some stories don’t begin with a kiss—they begin with an explosion.
When I first sat down to write TRUE SURRENDER, I knew I wasn’t telling a typical romance. Yes, it’s a love story—deep, redemptive, and hard-won—but it’s also rooted in the reality so many soldiers have lived: moments when life can change in a single breath, a single decision, a single blast of heat and sound.
The prologue drops you straight into one of those moments. The instinct to protect. The courage it takes to keep breathing when everything falls apart. The moment that sets Aaron on a journey of trauma, healing, faith, and unexpected love.
If you’ve ever wondered what shapes a hero long before the love story begins… step into the prologue below.


Afghanistan, 2008
Major Aaron Bricewick had a bad feeling about this.
The Humvee idled beneath him, engine vibrating up through the metal floorboards and into his boots. Diesel fumes seeped through the vents, thick and oily in the dry Afghan heat. He’d ridden this stretch of road more times than he could count—sun-bleached dirt, broken asphalt, abandoned compounds baking under a white sky—and the convoy had never stopped before.
The sudden stillness pressed in as he glanced at the canvas bag at his feet. The government-issued laptop inside held nothing classified, but in the wrong hands, even routine intel could become a weapon.
He turned to the driver. “What do you think, Hawkins?”
“Dunno, Major.” Hawkins kept his eyes forward, jaw tight. Sweat slid down his temple and disappeared beneath his collar. “Maybe they’re checkin’ for IEDs.” He thunked his fist against the empty turret ring above them. “Why’d they have to pull my gunner off my rig?”
Aaron shifted, the Kevlar vest biting into his shoulders, and looked back at Scott Ridley. The civilian contractor’s face gleamed with perspiration, his government-issued glasses magnifying eyes that were already too wide beneath his helmet.
To Scott’s right, Private First Class Cheryl Young stared out the window. She chewed her thumbnail to the quick, breath coming in shallow pulls. Four months ago, she’d arrived fresh and determined, and had proven herself a capable clerk with decent computer skills.
Aaron faced forward again and lifted the radio mic. “This is Major Bricewick in Hotel-Niner. Could I get a status update—”
BOOM!
The explosion punched the air from his lungs. The Humvee lurched violently as the shockwave rippled through the chassis. Dust burst past the windows in a choking cloud.
“Fuck!” Hawkins shouted. “They hit Hall!”
The vehicle behind us?
Aaron twisted in his seat, but could see nothing but smoke and chaos through the squat armor and narrow windows.
Gunfire erupted.
Rounds pinged across the hood, sharp metallic whines followed by dull, bone-deep thuds. Aaron ducked as spiderweb cracks bloomed across the windshield.
Hawkins grabbed the mic and shouted into it—
And then all hell broke loose.
Automatic fire hammered from every direction, and the ground trembled beneath them. Black smoke rolled over the windshield, swallowing what little visibility they had.
The insurgents were throwing everything at them.
Hawkins slammed his fist against the steering wheel. “I gotta help Hall!”
Aaron reached for the wild-eyed PFC. “Hawkins!”
“Stay in the vehicle, sir!”
Before Aaron could respond, Hawkins wrenched the door open and dove out, boots hitting dirt at a dead sprint.
The door slammed shut.
Damn it!
Aaron stared at the empty driver’s seat, heart pounding so hard it made his vision pulse. Could he climb over the turret platform and take control of the vehicle?
He released his seat belt, but before he could move, the driver’s door jerked open and a man vaulted into the seat.
The details registered in a flash—loose clothing, unfamiliar boots, definitely not U.S. military—before the barrel of an automatic rifle filled his vision.
He lunged for his Beretta M9.
The man fired.
The burst was deafening inside the cab. Muzzle flash lit the interior in stuttering orange. The rounds tore past Aaron’s shoulder into the rear of the Humvee.
Cheryl screamed—a raw, tearing sound that sliced straight through him.
Aaron’s body jerked. Had she been hit? Had Scott?
The rifle barrel swung back to his chest, and the man barked something in Pashto or Dari.
Aaron froze. One wrong move and the next burst would finish him.
The insurgent lunged forward, ripped the Beretta from Aaron’s holster with brutal efficiency, then jammed the Humvee into gear.
They surged forward.
The vehicle bounced over a berm, the suspension slamming hard enough to rattle Aaron’s teeth. Cheryl screamed again as they fishtailed, the world outside reduced to dust and blurred earth.
Aaron clutched the seat edges, fingers slipping on sweat-slick vinyl as they swerved.
They stopped so abruptly that his body snapped forward. His helmet struck the windshield with a sickening crack. White light exploded behind his eyes, and the world fractured into stars.
The passenger door flew open and hands seized him.
He was dragged out and thrown face-first into gravel and dirt. The impact drove the air from his lungs. Grit ground into his cheek. The taste of blood filled his mouth.
His arms were wrenched behind him—hard—shoulders screaming in protest. A knee drove into the center of his back, pinning him.
He forced his eyes open against the spinning haze.
Cheryl. Scott. Are they—
He was hauled upright so abruptly that his helmet slid sideways. His equilibrium lagged behind his body, his head impossibly heavy.
He blinked hard.
Cheryl and Scott stood several feet away.
Both bound.
Both alive.
Relief shot through him, but it died when a rifle butt slammed between his shoulder blades, driving him forward.
This was bad.
Very bad.
Voices shouted, harsh and urgent, in a language he couldn’t understand. Hands shoved him toward a pickup truck idling nearby, exhaust coughing into the air.
The open bed waited like a grave.
No!
He dug his boots into the dirt, muscles straining. He would not climb in willingly. He would fight until he physically couldn’t.
Movement to his right caught his attention, and he turned just in time to see burlap sacks yanked down over Cheryl’s and Scott’s heads.
He barely registered the rifle butt swinging toward him before it connected with his temple.
The world detonated in white.
Then everything went black.
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